For many years, Andres has been a friend of Josua. They had similar interests; they work together in Chocolate's company and they lived together for some time but their friendship broke up because Josua had relations with Andres' girlfriend. Years later Josua learnd how to shoot a gun and He went to Andres' house to kill him in order to get married with Linda (Andres' girlfriend), that afternoon at 6.30, Andres dead and Linda didn't accept the married so Josua kill her too and now a days He is in jail.
Criminal's letter to a Lawyer:
Good afternoon Mrs. Aura Salazar, I'm writing you because I need your help. I'm in jail and my case is very extrange. Well, I'm going to tell you all the truth of these: My name is Josua and I had a friend called Andres, we had similar interests; we worked together in Chocolate's company and we lived together for some time but our friendship broke up because I had relations with Andres' girlfriend. Years later I learnd how to shoot a gun and I went to Andres' house to kill him in order to get married with Linda (Andres' girlfriend), that afternoon at 6.30, Andres dead and Linda didn't accept the married so I kill her too because I was so nervous about the murder. Please help me, I don't want to be in jail the rest of my life, but I accept that I make a mistake.
Sincerely,
Josua.
1 comment:
you have some mistakes using the past and object pronouns, but in general it's a good letter...
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